An analysis of the first practical task – be critical, what could you improve?

what we could improve ? when we was recording the first practical task although it was very good it also need lots of improvements to make it better, these improvements improvements consist of the following: * More variety of camera angles * We could of prepared a script so we new exactly what we was going to say * Could of made it longer * Could of got more objects involved * Should of focused on more of a story line could of even made a story board for it * To hold the camera more steady